Dear Sir/Madam (Always do a mail merge to put my name in place!)
I am Mrs. Nazek Hariri (wow!), wife of the late Prime Minister of Lebanon, Mr Rafiq Hariri, (I’d almost believe this but the easiest way to violate CANSPAM laws is to send a message in which the FROM line differs from a realistic email address. Clearly, this wasn’t sent by Mrs. Hariri. 🙁 That said… this could be interpreted as a political message which is exempt) is I want you to assist me in retrieving a profiling amount in an excess of US$25million from the security company which the funds was deposited. Due to the up rising of political crisis in Lebanon. (this is a good place to embed a link in the email – what political crisis?)
All I need from you is to stand as the beneficiary of the Above quoted Sum and I will re-profile the funds with your Name, which will enable The West Africa Firm (Is this a real company? Provide a link to them) transfer the sum to you and equally invest it on his behalf in your country.your we be rewarded with 20%, (check your grammar! Spell check doesn’t catch everything) Can you be my partner on this? The transaction has to be concluded soon.
(No call to action? Take advantage of html to put a big button in the email to prompt the user to act. Make it clear how to take advantage of this clearly lucrative opportunity to be rewarded with $5M just for standing as the beneficiary of funds from politically stable Lebanon)
I Will provide you with the, details.
Mrs. Nazek Hariri
(Be sure to use an email vendor such as Constant Contact to get through spam filters and significantly increase the measurability of your campaign.)